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Story 08 · The Light

8Mahmoud and the Enemies of Success

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A drawing from the story “Mahmoud and the Enemies of Success”

Mahmoud was a devout young man living in a quiet village, always seeking peace and contentment in his heart. Yet he was often anxious and distracted, feeling that something was missing and that hidden forces were pulling him back.

One day at the mosque he saw an elderly sheikh talking with young people and offering them advice for life. Mahmoud felt as if the sheikh were speaking to him alone. After the prayer he approached him and told him about his feelings and confusion.

“There are four enemies that can hold a person back on the road to happiness.”

The sheikh told him about four enemies that can hold a person back on the road to happiness and contentment, and advised him to work on building himself, and not to give himself over to the paths that lead away from good.

After their talk, Mahmoud sat alone and reflected. He recalled many situations and began to see how these enemies had been working against him:

Satan. He remembered the many times he had skipped prayer or remembrance with the excuse of being busy or tired, and knew it was a whisper leading him away from obeying God.

The world. He realised he was wasting his time scrolling news and entertainment clips on his phone, neglecting both his faith and his worldly affairs.

The self. He remembered how he always procrastinated and never finished his projects, and knew it was his own self holding him back from his goals.

Desire. He realised that some of his relationships were not good for him, and were leading him away from the path of good.

So Mahmoud decided to face these forces with decisive steps. He began to rely on God more, to pray and seek forgiveness, and set aside time each day to know and refine himself. He cut back on social media, stepped away from negative relationships, and busied himself with what benefited his faith and his life.

In time his condition improved. He grew closer to God and more content with himself, facing life’s challenges with confidence and certainty.

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